4 May 2017

*SENTENCE COMBINATION*

Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences. Do not use a semi-colon.

Sentence 1: Marian is a graduate of Athabasca University.
Sentence 2: Marian was recently hired by a major corporation.
Sentence 3: She will be lead their international unit.

4 comments:

SamanthaK said...

Marian, a graduate of Athabasca University, was recently hired by a major corporation, and she will be leading their international unit.

Bradley Letourneau said...
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Bradley Letourneau said...

A major corporation recently hired Marian, who is a graduate from Athabasca University, to lead their international unit.

Michael said...

Those are both good answers. Here is another possibility, which incorporate both of your ideas:

Marian, a graduate of Athabasca University, was recently hired by a major corporation to lead their international unit.