5 July 2014

*TIME CHANGE*

On July 1st, Canada Day, I will go down town and watch the parade that will go from City Hall to River Park. I will follow the parade to the park and watch the Citizenship ceremony that will take place in the afternoon. My neighbours will be getting their citizenship at this ceremony, and I will be there to congratulate them and celebrate this achievement with them.

3 comments:

Audrey L said...

Past tense:

On July 1st, Canada Day, I went down town and watched the parade that went from City Hall to River Park. I followed the parade to the park and watched the Citizenship ceremony that took place in the afternoon. My neighbours were getting their citizenship at this ceremony, and I was there to congratulate them and celebrated this achievement with them.

rehabo said...

Past Perfect
On July 1st, Canada Day, I had gone down and watched the parade that will have gone from the City Hall to River Park. I will have followed the parade to the park and had watched the Citizenship ceremony that will took place in the afternoon. My neighbours will have been getting their citizenship at this ceremony, and I will have been there to congratulate and celebrate this achievement with them.

Michael said...

Good work, Audrey.

And a good try, rehabo -- but there are some problems with your answer.

I think you wanted to say something like the following:

On July 1st, Canada Day, I will have gone down and watched the parade that will have gone from the City Hall to River Park. I will have followed the parade to the park and watched the Citizenship ceremony that will have taken place in the afternoon. My neighbours will have been getting their citizenship at this ceremony, and I will have been there to congratulate and celebrate this achievement with them.